On Monday morning it was a cold day for a walk at Pt England. Big black and greyish clouds filled the sky. Ben and his dog went outside to get ready to go for a long walk. After Ben went with his dog and walked around the bush track two times, it began to rain. So Ben and his dog sprinted back home.
When they ran back home to have a rest, the rain stopped, so Ben went to do another lap.
Ben was pleased that he had done his athletics training for that day.
I like the way you took the time to reread this and improve it. Keep making sure that eery sentence makes good sense and try and keep using different sentence beginning Alex.
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